Comments for authorterry.motd.org http://authorterry.motd.org Site of Visionary Author Terry LaBarba Mon, 06 Feb 2012 10:21:08 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1.3 Comment on Science Fiction Fantasy Saturday February 4, 2012 by Pippa Jay http://authorterry.motd.org/?p=466#comment-107 Pippa Jay Mon, 06 Feb 2012 10:21:08 +0000 http://authorterry.motd.org/?p=466#comment-107 'Neutralize the threat' is a great way of saying 'let's kill him', lol. ‘Neutralize the threat’ is a great way of saying ‘let’s kill him’, lol.

]]> Comment on Science Fiction Fantasy Saturday February 4, 2012 by Melisse Aires http://authorterry.motd.org/?p=466#comment-104 Melisse Aires Sun, 05 Feb 2012 15:42:30 +0000 http://authorterry.motd.org/?p=466#comment-104 The characterization in this small snippet was great. I really got a sense of them and their conflict. The characterization in this small snippet was great. I really got a sense of them and their conflict.

]]> Comment on Science Fiction Fantasy Saturday February 4, 2012 by Laurel C Kriegler http://authorterry.motd.org/?p=466#comment-103 Laurel C Kriegler Sun, 05 Feb 2012 06:38:54 +0000 http://authorterry.motd.org/?p=466#comment-103 Very pragmatic - and how impersonal. Wayne's no longer Wayne. Just "the threat". Benson's an interesting guy, and I'm getting intrigued about Wayne's abilities. Very pragmatic – and how impersonal. Wayne’s no longer Wayne. Just “the threat”. Benson’s an interesting guy, and I’m getting intrigued about Wayne’s abilities.

]]> Comment on Science Fiction Fantasy Saturday February 4, 2012 by JC Cassels http://authorterry.motd.org/?p=466#comment-102 JC Cassels Sun, 05 Feb 2012 00:35:15 +0000 http://authorterry.motd.org/?p=466#comment-102 Neutralize the threat... 'nuff said. I like him. He sounds very no-nonsense and capable. Neutralize the threat… ’nuff said.

I like him. He sounds very no-nonsense and capable.

]]> Comment on Science Fiction Fantasy Saturday February 4, 2012 by Heidi Ruby Miller (@heidirubymiller) http://authorterry.motd.org/?p=466#comment-101 Heidi Ruby Miller (@heidirubymiller) Sat, 04 Feb 2012 20:54:42 +0000 http://authorterry.motd.org/?p=466#comment-101 Yes! A man of action. Neutralize the threat. That says it all. Great hook! Yes! A man of action.

Neutralize the threat. That says it all.

Great hook!

]]> Comment on Science Fiction Fantasy Saturday February 4, 2012 by Patrick Stutzman (@PatrickStutzman) http://authorterry.motd.org/?p=466#comment-100 Patrick Stutzman (@PatrickStutzman) Sat, 04 Feb 2012 18:45:04 +0000 http://authorterry.motd.org/?p=466#comment-100 The call to action always gets the blood pumping for more! Great dialogue for a great snippet! The call to action always gets the blood pumping for more! Great dialogue for a great snippet!

]]> Comment on Science Fiction Fantasy Saturday February 4, 2012 by T.K. Toppin http://authorterry.motd.org/?p=466#comment-99 T.K. Toppin Sat, 04 Feb 2012 15:48:53 +0000 http://authorterry.motd.org/?p=466#comment-99 Nice bit of dialogue...and well, I totally agree...you just have to neutralize the threat. Good stuff. Nice bit of dialogue…and well, I totally agree…you just have to neutralize the threat. Good stuff.

]]> Comment on Science Fiction Fantasy Saturday February 4, 2012 by Nicole Galloway-Miller http://authorterry.motd.org/?p=466#comment-98 Nicole Galloway-Miller Sat, 04 Feb 2012 15:36:22 +0000 http://authorterry.motd.org/?p=466#comment-98 I really enjoyed reading your snippet. I agree with Misa: "neutralize the threat" does sound better than kill him. Can't wait to read more. I really enjoyed reading your snippet. I agree with Misa: “neutralize the threat” does sound better than kill him. Can’t wait to read more.

]]> Comment on Science Fiction Fantasy Saturday February 4, 2012 by Gayle Ramage http://authorterry.motd.org/?p=466#comment-97 Gayle Ramage Sat, 04 Feb 2012 13:51:05 +0000 http://authorterry.motd.org/?p=466#comment-97 Interesting snippet. Looking forward to reading more next week. :) Interesting snippet. Looking forward to reading more next week. :)

]]> Comment on Science Fiction Fantasy Saturday February 4, 2012 by T. M. Hunter http://authorterry.motd.org/?p=466#comment-96 T. M. Hunter Sat, 04 Feb 2012 13:22:02 +0000 http://authorterry.motd.org/?p=466#comment-96 I do love the dialogue...great snippet! I do love the dialogue…great snippet!

]]>